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Saturday 3 September 2016

The Cave (35 of 365)

Welcome to day 35 of the 365 day poem challenge.

Word of the day gloaming meaning "twilight;dusk."

The Cave 

He wandered into the cave 
Backlit with a light that 
Called to mind his most
Primordial fears

The wind that swept 
Past his straight brown hair
Sounded like the tongue
Of a nightmare
Whispering "do not enter"
Echoing his parents

Who will I be, his elder self
Pondered inside 
The ego and superego
Debating today was for his id

Steps reverberated 
Down down down
Stalagmites deep pools
Pot holes and crevasses
That whistled up the earths secrets

He lay down on the floor
And closed his eyes
His chest constricted 
At the thought that the ceiling
Might swallow him up
He panted 

Darkness only darkness
This was the moment
Where he returned to nothing
This was the moment
When he realised his end
It tickled the ends of his toes
It kissed his forehead
It was gentler than he expected

Then finally
When the cave had worn
Itself out 
He emerged into the gloaming

His skin glistened 
Like an ember ghost 
Dancing in the sparkling twilight.

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