Club X (204 of 365)

Day 204 of the 265 day poem challenge.

Word of the day Comminatory meaning: "threatening, punitive or vengeful."

Club X

What is there about it
The rounded flesh
The way it spins
The tease of it

Step back through the haze
see the full haired persons
rioting silently rocking
like morphine hit hospital patients
rocking their intravenous drips

Their words
You like the shape of the their words
On oval lips
You imagine that your name
will be upon them those
pink oval lips
You imagine the power that comes
with a name
Remembrance

The smell is acquired to say the least
the vomit stain on the carpet from where
they got too wild

There is skill
that one was nearly an acrobat
Could stretch in so many ways
The thought could make you ejaculate
That's the smell like your father's old
vinyl collection wet and collecting dust

The movements are slow
Undulate a nice word
that encapsulates what happens
with the hips and the way
this resembles waves
but we're far from sea breezes here
this is a hot sauna
not like at the spa house
There's spit and alcohol and crack
There's pinched lips

There's a phantasmagoria
With these chimerical dames
Blowing smoke through hot pink lips
and Blond manes

The drones and flares of dance music
The monotonous comminatory stares
and slaps
Dissapointment eats into the late night
early morning folk
who lose focus and seek contrition
from the wares here on display
This is a lascivious excursion
A tantalising holiday
...only it isn't

The hot fuzz of smoke contaminates
The hidden brawl and testosterone,
Estrogen filled sauna room
low lights and bodies silent in the dark
But not them they stand in dim pale moonlight
Like shining ghosts with fat milky thighs.